Structure 
  
Identification 
A general orientation to the topic

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Olivia is my friend. She is 15 years old.

Description 
Feature 1:
Personality trait
Extra information 

Text
She is gorgeous and smart
She has a lot of friends

Feature 2:
Text = Olivia has long black hair
She is tall and has fair skin

Feature 3:
Text = Olivia has round face
She always wears gray square glasses

Feature 4:
Text = Olivia likes watching a movie
Her favorite genre is action, thriller, and sci-fi
She watches movies on weekend
She will prepare ice chocolate drink before watching movies
Comment
Text = Her classmate enjoys discussing about movies with her.

c. Writing and editing

Olivia is my friend. She is 15 years old. She is gorgeous and smart, that’s why she has a lot of friends. Olivia has long black hair. She is tall and has fair skin. 

Olivia has round face. So, she always wears gray square glasses to disguise the slight roundness of her face. Olivia likes watching a movie. Her favorite genre is action, thriller, and sci-fi. She watches movies on weekend. Before watching movies, she will prepare ice chocolate drink. Her classmate enjoys discussing about movies with her, because she has watched a lot of movies. 

(MG/AFIFAH ZAHRAH JULIANDINI)